Viability: I think your mechanics are in right place but can use some work with regards to placement. I feel like starting at the bottom would work better for the players control. I also think that spacing things out a little more will help me move around with more certainty.
Presentation: So far I can tell what I'm not supposed to hit, what I can hit, the background is cute and the level is pretty clear. The pool of water (as a danger) was a little confusing but that can be improved .
Theme: Seems like a simple platform shooter, more flavor will come as you add more style.
Engagement: I think the mechanics are fun, I just wish things were a little more spaced out so I had less chance of dying right now is all.
Beautiful presentation! Would be cool to see it further developed. Not being able to jump on the white platforms adds a unique challenge to the traversal aspect. Honestly really pleasing to the eyes!
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Viability: I think most everything works. It is playable but their are just a few things that need tweaking. But the elements work together nicely!
Presentation: I can tell right away what I need to do and the rules are understandable.
Theme: The theme is clear but it would be nice to see a character in the future!
Engagement: I played it like three times till I before I realized I need some practice! It is a fun game to play!
siiiick. would love some kind of visual representation of health, though! i hit a triangle and didn't realize they were bad cause it just disappeared
Viability: I think your mechanics are in right place but can use some work with regards to placement. I feel like starting at the bottom would work better for the players control. I also think that spacing things out a little more will help me move around with more certainty.
Presentation: So far I can tell what I'm not supposed to hit, what I can hit, the background is cute and the level is pretty clear. The pool of water (as a danger) was a little confusing but that can be improved .
Theme: Seems like a simple platform shooter, more flavor will come as you add more style.
Engagement: I think the mechanics are fun, I just wish things were a little more spaced out so I had less chance of dying right now is all.
Beautiful presentation! Would be cool to see it further developed. Not being able to jump on the white platforms adds a unique challenge to the traversal aspect. Honestly really pleasing to the eyes!